#Dedicated
He is like a whimsical formed line across the sky.
He is like a shore of horizon turning into a shade of mulberry.
Oh so luminous and illuminating
Like the extended banks of cloud that grew darker, painted blue on blue, one stroke at a time, into deeper and deeper shades of periwinkle nuance.
Sometimes like a stray wisp of formed hues giving a dazzling view.
Like a choreography of notions.
His mere glance makes a reverberation dance.
Oh, so enlightening and sublime.
Drowning in the depth of his mind is like the waves of ocean and tides that allows free flow of thoughts.
He is like a stroke of brush that embellishes a sheet of canvas and make it the most enchanting painting ever.
He is a loophole of lively memories that makes everything glow and gleam.
Oh, so lovely and heartwarming
Like a soul made up of sunset, champagne and kisses.
Sometimes he moves like a sibilant waves, sometimes like frantic waves.
Or the confined air that makes me lose my way into him.
Twirling into his trail of expressions and fluttering with childlike excitement.
Holding him wildly and adjusting myself into his arms
Makes me feel that I know him since sky begin to grew darker.
To connect with me:
Superb ❤️It.
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I am really happy to hear that. Thank you so much ❤️😊
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Nice lovely!🌿
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Thank you so much ❤️😊
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superb poem! loved it!
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Happy to know that.Thank you so much ❤️😊
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Lucky him 😁💙👍🏽 amazing poem
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Thank you so much 💙😊
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Such a lovely dedication.. I love each & every verses of this poetry.. !
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Happy to hear that. Thank you for the beautiful feedback. It means a lot 😊
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Very elegantly written
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Thank you for the kind words, appreciate them very much 😊
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Your welcome
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So eloquently and exquisitely penned! Completely gorgeous imagery and I’m still in awe over it. ♥️ ~Kelsey
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Glad to know that. Thank you for the beautiful feedback 💓
Warmest Regards
Rudra
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Sounds like you are in affectionate love with some lucky guy, I dare not to ask his name. 😀 So wonderful how you ake the words radiate with emotions. 😀 Well done Commander. 😀
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Oh, I just tried to add a touch of emotion in my poetry. I am glad it did it work. Thank you for the kind words. They means a lot 😊
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This is so lovely to read. Subtle hue of affection and endearment makes this a shiny poem, purely emotive i can say. Kudos.
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Glad to know that. A touch of emotion in words weave a beautiful poetry. Thank you for the beautiful comment. It means a lot to me 😊
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