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“Take me back to time
Open the timeless eternity of soul
Walk down the glorious path decorated with all the memories that makes us warm
Once again the starlights will enhance the curious heart and wandering soul”

On a leap day, something unusual happened in the sky and in the world of cosmology, fate destined two mellifluous souls,
On the surface of the universe, all the stars gathered together and created a unique combination of atoms.
Two different personalities stood near the fountain of the universe and the vicissitude of divination, and disencumber filled with bewildering situation.
Traces of a general and substantial belief left their mark on the maple leaf, just like a soul has a twofold life.
A feeble gesture of haste curated the sense of romance and has given predominated purpose to their life.
Vividness in the vision conveyed the illusion of reality and present scenario witnessed the coherence in their action.
The lucidity of the phenomenon dwells upon the realm of frost and dew of fantasy and reality.
Like an interpreted vision, destiny well acquainted the proposition regarding the unconscious cerebration.
From the corner of the eyes, a constellation found, yet hard to fathom the love the flown souls fell into.
And the connection aligned with fate and an inexplicable sense got tingles in the body.
An evocative sensation has occurred and molecules formed a chemistry.
Like a binary star system, the gravitational force insulated the flown souls from the fantasy and an infinite galaxy destined them together.
Connection attracted the bond, and a convincer of fate rigged the destiny in their favor that lead to a miraculous tale.
The dream of a flown souls turned into the forever dancing across the constellation of stars and made them bound, yet the surge of emotions drowned them in the sea of emotional hemisphere.
And, the hourglass took them back to the time of fantasy and opened the timeless eternity within their souls.
Once again the starlights enhanced the curious heart and wandering soul.
Every element of nature rejoiced the moment and, from the smell of dust after long sunset to infinity, touched the ticking clock of compelling universe.
The fragrance of dust, vital flows, and, got crashed into the soil and a long awaited desire of earth of meeting the dew drops of rain, gets fulfilled.
Yet, the puzzle of stars stretched across the milky surface of the universe and, scattered by the Midas touch of infinity.
A ray of sunrise diminished the last night and, make Its vision blur, yet the Starbucks mugs were missing the heavenly taste of luminous lips.
Suddenly, the vision of last night triggered the mind like, the appearance of sun in the sky, vanishes the moon from the horizon.
A slight temporal visit in the voyage of subconscious mind turned the fantasy into a reality and the intuitive nudge created the vision of the future,
And, the eyes that captured mine in just a swift glance, locked in to the corner of my eyes, and it just triggered my mind and gripped my vision.
Desires met the ultimate felicity and the void begins to fill and, its heartwarming rhyme synchronized with the breath.
Yet, the intensity of desired action creeps beyond the horizon and a realization that the man, my eyes got locked in to, is none other than the one I saw in the vision of last night,
filled my heart with joy.

Part 1: Etched in Eternity

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25 comments

  1. Kelwyn · April 7, 2018

    Very high standard words … While I scroll down reading, I cannot fully understand the lines … Professional words are used … ☺ … !

    Liked by 1 person

    • Rudra Makwana · April 7, 2018

      Let me simplify it for you,
      This poem is depicting the journey of two individuals and how fate destined them together. We think that we choose the person but it’s fate that decide who comes into our life and destiny plans the next move to take.

      Thank you so much for reading and appreciating it. Glad to hear from you 💗😊

      Like

      • Kelwyn · April 8, 2018

        Oh … That means Fate and Destiny are two different things. Anyway, cool theme to write a poem. Good poem.

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  2. personalgrowthsuccessblog · March 26, 2018

    This is a beautiful picture and piece !!!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Nyctophile · March 23, 2018

    Absolutely made my day! Wonderful piece of writing

    Liked by 1 person

    • Rudra Makwana · March 24, 2018

      It gives me great joy to read such touching comment. Thank you so much.💓

      Like

  4. Felix Achola Odhiambo · March 16, 2018

    I love your lexical choice and use of imagery. I could visualise the unfolding scenery as I read through. Good work.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Rudra Makwana · March 16, 2018

      Thank you for your humbling and heartwarming compliment. I am glad you liked my work. 😊

      Like

  5. Wendo Kenyanito · March 16, 2018

    Well crafted. I love this.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Rudra Makwana · March 16, 2018

      It’s great honor to receive such words of encouragement and appreciation. Thank you so much! Glad to hear from you. 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  6. MORALITY PARK · March 15, 2018

    You’re very welcome. 🙂

    – A.G.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. MORALITY PARK · March 15, 2018

    Such an immaculate vision you have. Beautifully painted in verse.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Rudra Makwana · March 15, 2018

      It’s encouraging to hear such beautiful comment. Thank you so much! Your heartening words made me very happy. 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  8. Rajan Radhakrishnan · March 15, 2018

    A poetic blend of Love and Cosmos into a single story with poem like structure. Too good and truly inspiring for beginners like me. ✌️

    Liked by 1 person

    • Rudra Makwana · March 15, 2018

      It’s great honor to receive such words of encouragement and love. And Glad to hear that my piece of writing inspired you.
      Thank you for your humbling and heartwarming compliment.💗😊

      Liked by 1 person

  9. Ravisingh · March 14, 2018

    you are always welcome,Rudra!

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Ravisingh · March 14, 2018

    What a lovely and well written post! its masterpiece.! I loved it.

    Liked by 1 person

    • Rudra Makwana · March 14, 2018

      Thank you so much for your heartening words. The loving compliment is highly appreciated. 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  11. Graciiii · March 13, 2018

    Wow! Subtle 👌 from start to finish.. made my heart pumping.. cresendo!

    Liked by 2 people

    • Rudra Makwana · March 13, 2018

      My heart is filled with joy to receive such words of encouragement and love. Thank you for your beautiful compliment! 😊

      Liked by 2 people

      • Graciiii · March 13, 2018

        You are welcome Rudra 😊❤

        Liked by 1 person

      • Rudra Makwana · March 13, 2018

        ❤️😊

        Liked by 1 person

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